hey guys i know it has been a while since i posted anything at all, but I am working on a story for english class at school and I wanted to get your feedback, its not even close to the full story yet, i mean its hardly a page, but I want you to tell me if its a good start or not…

Test Subject

Wake up at 6:30, brush my teeth, shower, Clothes, breakfast, car, work.

Work,car,home,football,dinner,sleep.

This is the routine I follow Monday-Saturday, on Sunday? On Sundays I rest.

I know it’s not the best life, right? But it’s something.

We are sorry Mr. Dale but we just can’t accept someone that has been a test subject!

A test subject I was never and have never been test subject!!

You can’t deny it, it’s right here in your permanent record.

Give me that I scream at the man, just then I notice he  was wearing black tuxedo, the mysterious man proceeds to hands me my permanent record, I quickly flip through it, I find nothing.

See I was never a test subject, I couldn’t have been one.

Flip through it again, as I flip through the pages I see my life go through my eyes, Harvard College, Honors degree, 1^st Place at every sport, and then, I suddenly see it, but… but… This can’t be true, I mean literally, I remember every second of my life, even the dreams, then it came to me, this is all a dream, I probably already won the election and I got so excited I fainted, yeah that must be it.

Well, Well, since this is all a dream I can do anything I want, I charge at one of the bodyguards and I grab his taser, stand back!! Stand back I said… I repeat the phrase a few more times, I shoot one of the bodyguards and exit the building.

As I sprint to my car I start seeing my adult life through my eyes, finish college, get married, 40’s birthday party… Wait a second, that is not my whole life, I stop and I try to remember what had happened before I got married.

Just then I heard some footsteps and I see one of the bodyguards charging for me, I try to turn but are shot by a taser gun which hits me strait in the forehead… I pass out.

Waking up in a huge limo with two bodyguards at your side is not so beautiful after you’ve just been tasered, the driver asks one of the bodyguards if he would like to stop for dinner, the bodyguard answers by rubbing his belly and saying “Well old Bessy is getting a little bit hungry”